Summer Solstice

sun-filled hours
as long as sunset shadows-
the longest day

Paint me a dark sky. Drop
a moon in the corner. Dot
the blackness with twinkles - red, blue,
white, some a foamy shade of
green. Turn the lights off inside,
the better to look up. Watch
the day’s heat fork the sky
in the distance. It all gets
shorter from here, a race down
the back side of the year.

At d’Verse, Frank offered a challenge to write a haibun and reference the solstice, summer or winter. A haibun consists of one to a few paragraphs of prose—usually written in the present tense—that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional/autobiographical. They may be preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.

I cut my prose to 6-word lines, just because.

The other prompt I worked with today comes from 300 South Media Group on Instagram and is “midnight storm”, something we often get in Florida at this time of year.


Did you know I’m on Instagram and Facebook? I am! Sometimes I’m on TikTok, too, though I don’t post there as often.


13 responses to “Summer Solstice”

  1. I love the way you began your haibun with a sun-filled haiku and then turned it upside down to a night sky, and the lovely phrase ‘Watch the day’s heat fork the sky in the distance’.

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