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sun-filled hours
as long as sunset shadows-
the longest day
Paint me a dark sky. Drop
a moon in the corner. Dot
the blackness with twinkles - red, blue,
white, some a foamy shade of
green. Turn the lights off inside,
the better to look up. Watch
the day’s heat fork the sky
in the distance. It all gets
shorter from here, a race down
the back side of the year.
At d’Verse, Frank offered a challenge to write a haibun and reference the solstice, summer or winter. A haibun consists of one to a few paragraphs of prose—usually written in the present tense—that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional/autobiographical. They may be preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.
I cut my prose to 6-word lines, just because.
The other prompt I worked with today comes from 300 South Media Group on Instagram and is “midnight storm”, something we often get in Florida at this time of year.
13 responses to “Summer Solstice”
Beautifully rendered! I love how evocative the imagery is!
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Thank you.
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Love it. The beginning is the end is the beginning. I’m bracing for weather in the 90s the rest of the week!🥵
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We’ve been back into the 80s with the rain we received last week, but I expect it be back in the 90s. Just a couple more months of this.
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I love the way you began your haibun with a sun-filled haiku and then turned it upside down to a night sky, and the lovely phrase ‘Watch the day’s heat fork the sky in the distance’.
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Thank you, Kim.
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You’re welcome,, Cris.
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Yes… from here it is all downhill… enjoy it while it last
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True for so many things in life, including life.
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This is now my favorite of yours. Just serene and beautiful
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Thank you so much, Debi!
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Love ‘the back side of the year’ ~~~ lovely writing!!
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Wonderful Cris.🙂✌🏼
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